Friday, March 6, 2009

Ten syllables

Let's see if you can count syllables. Please write 4 lines of poetry (they don't have to rhyme), ten syllables each line. Tell me something about the story of Romeo and Juliet so far (up to where the Prince exiles him).

39 comments:

  1. Well Romeo is in love with juliet
    and wants to marry her but he cant because of the family
    Tybalt was killed durin a little fight
    he was stabbed with a nife and died 1 min later
    we was frowning but eas not cryin and then he finailly died
    Romeo was sad and he was Mercuitio and then thats where we left off i think

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  2. romeo's friend got killed by a bad foe
    he tried to think he is alive but no
    angry he was he couldn't keep it in
    he kills tybalt for his revenge the end

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  3. O Romeo I love you so
    I shall never let you go
    How can I hate such a beautiful face
    No one could ever take your place
    not even Paris
    Our love history shall always cherish
    I cry more for you than a thousand kinsmen
    And pray for forgiveness to heaven
    I would rather die than be untrue
    And most of all Romeo
    I will always love you

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  4. mourning and weeping over Tybalt’s death
    Romeo’s banishment is the right way
    drinking the potion Friar gave to her
    killing herself with Romeo’s dagger

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  5. merciutio romeo friend had died.
    mercutio puts bad luck forever
    romeo kills bonvolio and then
    romeo has to leave verona now

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  6. romeo and juliet got married
    tybalt got stabbed
    tybalt died
    mercutio died
    -aaron

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  7. So far Romeo and Juliet are in love.
    Capulets hate the Montagues a lot.
    So far Tybalt killed Mercutio fast.
    That causes Romeo mad and kills tybalt

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  8. for doting not for loving purpil mine=10
    to lay one in anotherout to have=11
    i pray thee chide me not her i love now=10
    thy lovedid read by rote that could not spell=10

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  9. tybalt kills mercutio romeo crys and screamhis name.
    blood shatter dripping and all over romeos shirt.
    everybody comes they took a good look of tybalt.
    joy became to tears sadness,water of blood.

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  10. Romeo and Juliet bond outstandinglly rare
    although Romeo is happy sad he is
    killig is bad so get out and go away

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  11. For thou I was lying here In this cold,dark place.Thy voice I was supposed to hear But our dream became our disgrace Why could not thou wait for a little while? For I would wake up and smile.

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  12. Romeo fell in love with Juliet.
    They got married because of their synched love.
    Tybalt killed Mercutio, Romeo killed him.
    The prince then decided to exile him.

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  13. Romeo and Juliet fall in love
    They then get married to one another
    Tybalt and Mercutio die and then,
    Romeo is exiled from the town.

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  14. O romeo you are now gone from here
    In exile you run from the darkness
    You come back for your true love, Juliet
    Juliet so sad of the words spoken

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  15. Mercutio's death came to Romeo
    In his mind, Tybalt is already dead
    Killing Tybalt, ruining the laws of Prince,
    Romeo is to leave fair Verona

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  16. Finding out my Love had killed my cousin
    Has caused me devastation, confusion
    The man I belived to be wonderful
    Was a beast hidden behind pure beauty

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  17. Romeo like this girl named Juliet
    Their families have hated each other
    Their parents are mad they like each other
    So they sneak around from their families

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  18. Montague's and Capulet's are bad boys
    They start big fight and big trouble
    The prince came and set rules upon them all.
    Romeo's friend gets killed and he fights back.

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  19. Romeo and Juliet, love love love.
    They were always meant to be together.
    But their mean families hate each other.
    They always get in fights with each other.

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  20. Juliet at first sight you made me love.
    Then you had my hand and heart in marriage.
    But then I was angered, with him, Tybalt.
    Now I apologize for what I've done.

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  21. first, romeo gave up on rosaline
    after, romeo married juliet
    tybalt then started a fight with romeo
    now, mercutio and tybalt both are dead.

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  22. Romeo Revenges Mercutio.
    Tybalt dies in battle from Romeo.
    Juliet thinks Romeo is dead now.
    The Prince resigns Exile to Romeo.

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  23. o I am banishe'd how will I live?
    I will miss my poor Juliet now i am sad
    I am now to die alone without my Juliet
    so long evil fiends i will haunt you forever!

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  25. family's stop the love between two young.
    hates from older generation to young.
    But their love didn't stop til one was dead.
    Fighting, joking, bring the death of two man.

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  26. Romeo And Juliet find trouble
    juliet's cousin fought with romeo
    He is now exiled and Tybalt is dead
    Why can't these families get along?

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  27. tEn SyLabLes

    i have a dream to be with that one love
    my dream is to be with him forever
    he is all i need and all that i want
    i love him and he is my romeo

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  28. Romeo and Juliet are in Love.
    To prove their love they both decide to marry.
    Then Romeo kills tybalt for revenge.
    Now Juliet does not know what to do.

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  29. poem:
    Romeo is in love with juliet.
    Romeo killed juliet's cousin tybalt.
    The nurse can never explain herself right.
    And sadly romeo has been exiled.

    about play till this point:
    Roemo and juliet are married!Mercutio is dead. Tybalt is dead. No one has told romeo he has been exiled. The families do not know romeo and juliet are married.

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  30. poem:
    Romeo is in love with juliet.
    Romeo killed juliet's cousin tybalt.
    The nurse can never explain herself right.
    And sadly romeo has been exiled.

    about play till this point:
    Roemo and juliet are married!Mercutio is dead. Tybalt is dead. No one has told romeo he has been exiled. The families do not know romeo and juliet are married.

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  31. mercutio got into a big sword figh.
    him and thyloid fought to the death with swords.
    mercutio got killed by thyloid's sharp sword.
    romeo got mad and wanted revenge

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  32. Love shared by romeo and juliet
    marriage making happy endings
    only before there was nothing but hatred
    sneaking and hiding to keep safe

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  33. Ten Syllables:

    Fall through the broken cracks of reality.
    We may not find what it is meant to be.
    In Smoke and Mirrors where we kept our fears.
    Dreams, Nightmares are all bottled up inside.

    Romeo and Juliet:

    So far in the play, there has been 'eye for an eye' that happened because two people had lost their lives because of the coflict that occurs between these two families, Romeo's family and Juliet's. Romeo lost his best friend, and he had revenge by killing Juliet's cousin, but he didn't mean to. Now for Juliet, hearing this news about her cousin's death, it made her question Romeo's image, if he was pretty on the outside and ugly on the inside... and I'm sure she doesn't want to marry someone who is evil on the inside.

    Per.6 ~ J.L. Garcia

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  34. Capulet's and Montague's are haters.
    they hate to kill and destroy each other.
    juliet and romeo are in love.
    now they hope their family would be peace.

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  35. Romeo and Juliet are in Love.
    Juliet and Romeo are married
    Montugue and Capulets fight alot.
    Then Mercutio is killed by Tybalt

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  36. i pray thee chide me not her i love now
    romeo and juliet get married
    mercutio and Tybalt pass away
    Romeo lost a very close fellow

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  37. Romeo so gentle, yet so cruel
    Killed Tybalt and was banished by the Prince.
    Hurry he left with his wife wondering
    When he will come back to see her again.

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  38. i love romeo he is my everything .
    i cant live without him next to me .
    he is the reason im alive .
    me, julit is very in love with romeo .

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  39. love romeo he is my everything .
    i cant live without him next to me .
    he is the reason im alive .
    me, julit is very in love with romeo .

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